The following is a comment I left for a classmate on his blog post about hip-hop artist KRS-One.
"Carlos,
As a huge fan of KRS-One myself, I was excited to see someone else do a write-up on him and his work. He certainly has had an impressive career thus far. It's worth noting that he is preparing to release his 20th studio album this year. That includes the 7 albums he did with Boogie Down Productions. The post's ideas were separated in a logical manner and the extra pictures make it even more interesting. You provided a lot of great information. The only suggestion I would make would be to proofread your work. I noticed a lot of grammatical errors that made it difficult to read at times. Other than that, keep up the good work! "
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