The following is a comment I left on a fellow classmate's post about The Velvet Underground & Nico.
"John, I liked your attention to detail when explaining the record. Having heard it myself, I can agree that it is not the easiest thing to describe. Your adjectives are fantastic in describing the sounds of the album. Your facts and history are all on point and provide the reader with enough information in a short enough amount of reading to prevent them from getting bored. My only critique would be to proofread your work. There were a couple punctuation and grammatical errors but other than that it is well written. Separate paragraphs to show the main ideas would have also improved the work a little in my opinion. Keep up the good work!"
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