"Clay, your entry on "Pet Sounds" by the Beach boys was very direct and provided all of the information the reader would need to know in a brief and easy to understand paragraph. I like your attention to detail on the obscure instruments that Brian Wilson used when recording the "Pet Sounds" album. The only criticism I would offer you would be to split up your post into paragraphs in order to separate the main ideas and I believe that "Pet Sounds" should be italicized to show that is a proper noun. Other than that you are doing a great job, keep up the good work!"
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